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Thanks to all of you! You guys have some good points. This is the edited version and I'm sure there are more things need to be fix. Because I've just blacken out the background and add a moon to it. Any comment is welcome. So, what do you think?:!:
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Hiya,
Hope you dont mind, I moved the moon that you added in - felt it should really line up with the reflection - maybe like it is causing the reflection. Also just rotated the canvas a degree to the counter-clockwise to make things look a little neater. What do you think now? Sorry also made the moon a little brighter to give the effect of it causing that much brightness to the water - could maybe do with a little more? Dom |
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I think this is much better, mind i think the moon is to low in the sky it looks strange to me, and if you are going to brighten the moon specialy if it is that low you should give it a reflection on the sea.
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You've chosen to show us the water, quite boring if i may say so. What is above it in the background..... More interesting than plain old water dont your think. pick your points of interest with more caution next time....
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Thank you guys! This is indeed much better to move the moon and brighten up
a bit. It looks more realistic!I've learneda lot. I love this forum. If anyone wants to add more interesting things to this picture for fun, go right ahead. Thank you! |
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