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RedRhino · Jan 29, 2006, 7:09 PM

Sorry for the cross post but I am interested in suggestions you may have

[email protected] · Jan 29, 2006, 7:22 PM

It's a cool shot.

There's a real harmony between the color of the rope, the girls clothes, and the look on her face.

excellent job!

Hards80 · Jan 29, 2006, 7:30 PM

this is a really nice shot.. especially considering it appears you caught this one in the moment.. it is framed nicely and as was said previously the red ropes work nicely against the green background and work well with the subject..

for symmetries sake i might clone out the part of the rope that is at the very bottom left hand side of the frame..

VTphotog · Jan 29, 2006, 7:37 PM

I agree about the rope on bottom left, but I think I would get rid of it by tightening up the crop a bit. I like the composition a lot, just think it needs to be either tighter, or pulled back a bit to give more context to the ropes.

brian

Aumma45 · Jan 29, 2006, 9:08 PM

I like the framing. The colour patterns. But it seems there is some softness even on the main subject. Regards. Jaki

LadyhawkVA · Jan 31, 2006, 12:46 PM

The colors work together beautifully and the framing is excellent. It looks like the camera focused on the rope just in front of the girl's hand rather than the girl. She's not OOF, but she's not quite as sharp as the rope right in front of her.

RedRhino · Jan 31, 2006, 5:29 PM

I agree about the focus issue

The idea came to me... I ran like mad around the climber and had one chance. 3 seconds later she was stuck and terrified.

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Jan 29, 2006, 7:22 PM	#2
[email protected] Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 2,540	It's a cool shot. There's a real harmony between the color of the rope, the girls clothes, and the look on her face. excellent job!

Jan 29, 2006, 7:30 PM	#3
Hards80 Super Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 9,046	this is a really nice shot.. especially considering it appears you caught this one in the moment.. it is framed nicely and as was said previously the red ropes work nicely against the green background and work well with the subject.. for symmetries sake i might clone out the part of the rope that is at the very bottom left hand side of the frame..

Jan 29, 2006, 7:37 PM	#4
VTphotog Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Extreme Northeastern Vermont, USA Posts: 4,309	I agree about the rope on bottom left, but I think I would get rid of it by tightening up the crop a bit. I like the composition a lot, just think it needs to be either tighter, or pulled back a bit to give more context to the ropes. brian

Jan 29, 2006, 9:08 PM	#5
Aumma45 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 1,940	I like the framing. The colour patterns. But it seems there is some softness even on the main subject. Regards. Jaki

Jan 31, 2006, 12:46 PM	#6
LadyhawkVA Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,374	The colors work together beautifully and the framing is excellent. It looks like the camera focused on the rope just in front of the girl's hand rather than the girl. She's not OOF, but she's not quite as sharp as the rope right in front of her.

Jan 31, 2006, 5:29 PM	#7
RedRhino Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 220	I agree about the focus issue The idea came to me... I ran like mad around the climber and had one chance. 3 seconds later she was stuck and terrified.