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Sorry for the cross post but I am interested in suggestions you may have
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It's a cool shot.
There's a real harmony between the color of the rope, the girls clothes, and the look on her face. excellent job! |
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this is a really nice shot.. especially considering it appears you caught this one in the moment.. it is framed nicely and as was said previously the red ropes work nicely against the green background and work well with the subject..
for symmetries sake i might clone out the part of the rope that is at the very bottom left hand side of the frame.. |
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I agree about the rope on bottom left, but I think I would get rid of it by tightening up the crop a bit. I like the composition a lot, just think it needs to be either tighter, or pulled back a bit to give more context to the ropes.
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I like the framing. The colour patterns. But it seems there is some softness even on the main subject. Regards. Jaki
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The colors work together beautifully and the framing is excellent. It looks like the camera focused on the rope just in front of the girl's hand rather than the girl. She's not OOF, but she's not quite as sharp as the rope right in front of her.
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I agree about the focus issue
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