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fiteb · Feb 11, 2006, 12:29 PM

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style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"SOY NUEVO EN ESTE FORO, E VISTO FOTOGRAFIAS IMPRESIONANTES, QUIERO APRENDER MAS DE FOTOGRAFIA

HI THIS IS MY FIRST SHOOT IN THIS FORUM, I WOULD LIKE LEARN MORE ABOUT PHOTOGRAPHY

Sergeant · Feb 11, 2006, 1:59 PM

Welcome:G, I always like to see new faces... You captured the fireworks nicely, the only thing I have to say really is you may want to try a telephoto lens or zoom more towards the fireworks, because I find that structure on the left and the tree on the right don't really go with the fireworks.

Hards80 · Feb 11, 2006, 2:35 PM

the biggest issue i see is that you cut off half of the fireworks.. zooming in and filling the frame with the fireworks without cutting any of it off would have looked the best here.. plus you seem to be at an odd angle here too..

it appears you just looked up and shot away..

next time take your time and get set up ahead of time.. get your shot lined up and taking a couple practice shots.. then you will be perfectly ready when the shot comes. that goes for any subject, preparation is the most important aspect.. think about what you are trying to capture and how you want to present it.. then take some time checking out different angles and different backgrounds.. take a few shots and review.. if something looks good, concentrate on that angle and don't be afraid to "work the scene" a bit and take several shots.. afterall digital images are FREE!!

welcome aboard,
dustin

DomCotton · Feb 11, 2006, 2:45 PM

Bienvenido a este foro...

Dom

fiteb · Feb 11, 2006, 6:49 PM

TO: SERGEANT

I AGREE WITH YOU, BUT I WAS UNDER A TREE. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS ONE

Sergeant · Feb 11, 2006, 6:54 PM

Yes, this composition is much better than the first

Hards80 · Feb 12, 2006, 12:02 AM

it is better.. but you still cut off part of the explosion.. better to include it all..

Feb 11, 2006, 12:29 PM	#1
fiteb Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 11	HOLA style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"SOY NUEVO EN ESTE FORO, E VISTO FOTOGRAFIAS IMPRESIONANTES, QUIERO APRENDER MAS DE FOTOGRAFIA HI THIS IS MY FIRST SHOOT IN THIS FORUM, I WOULD LIKE LEARN MORE ABOUT PHOTOGRAPHY Attached Images

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Feb 11, 2006, 1:59 PM	#2
Sergeant Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 126	Welcome:G, I always like to see new faces... You captured the fireworks nicely, the only thing I have to say really is you may want to try a telephoto lens or zoom more towards the fireworks, because I find that structure on the left and the tree on the right don't really go with the fireworks.

Feb 11, 2006, 2:35 PM	#3
Hards80 Super Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 9,046	the biggest issue i see is that you cut off half of the fireworks.. zooming in and filling the frame with the fireworks without cutting any of it off would have looked the best here.. plus you seem to be at an odd angle here too.. it appears you just looked up and shot away.. next time take your time and get set up ahead of time.. get your shot lined up and taking a couple practice shots.. then you will be perfectly ready when the shot comes. that goes for any subject, preparation is the most important aspect.. think about what you are trying to capture and how you want to present it.. then take some time checking out different angles and different backgrounds.. take a few shots and review.. if something looks good, concentrate on that angle and don't be afraid to "work the scene" a bit and take several shots.. afterall digital images are FREE!! welcome aboard, dustin

Feb 11, 2006, 2:45 PM	#4
DomCotton Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 490	Bienvenido a este foro... Dom

Feb 11, 2006, 6:54 PM	#6
Sergeant Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 126	Yes, this composition is much better than the first

Feb 12, 2006, 12:02 AM	#7
Hards80 Super Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 9,046	it is better.. but you still cut off part of the explosion.. better to include it all..