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Geminichild · Mar 11, 2006, 11:33 AM

Took a ride last night did some time exposures, Think I need to darken the building just a little. Comments always welcome...

Sergeant · Mar 11, 2006, 2:29 PM

This is anawesome shot, but there is a white halo around the building that might need fixing.

Geminichild · Mar 11, 2006, 2:49 PM

Yes and not only that before anyone else says it, I will say that the tops of the roof where it comes to the triangle shape looks jagged (pixelated) but I printed this picture on Photo paper and its not like that when printed .

julies517 · Mar 11, 2006, 6:07 PM

i'll say it again...very cool atmospheric image- spoooky

TD Cole · Mar 11, 2006, 6:29 PM

Very cool shot and I think the white halo so to speak is the clouds passing by on this time exposure:-)

Geminichild · Mar 11, 2006, 8:20 PM

Seeing if maybe this is better

LadyhawkVA · Mar 15, 2006, 10:41 AM

I like the second, but is your horizon just slightly tilted? The building seems to be leaning a bit.

oBSidian · Mar 15, 2006, 12:41 PM

This is a lovely shot.

Only thing I have to add to what's already been said is that for me, the crop is a little too tight around the building. Now, I wasn't there, so there's probably good reason - ugly things next to it, for e.g. - but if you could afford to give it a bit more context at the sides, I think it'd work even better!

If it were short exposure, I'd say try a pano, with the camera in portrait orientation. But with long exposures and that sky, that'd be tough! lol.

Best,

-Ben

KENNETHD · Mar 15, 2006, 12:48 PM

Very good shot...

Kd

Mar 11, 2006, 11:33 AM	#1
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Mar 11, 2006, 2:29 PM	#2
Sergeant Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 126	This is anawesome shot, but there is a white halo around the building that might need fixing.

Mar 11, 2006, 2:49 PM	#3
Geminichild Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 663	Yes and not only that before anyone else says it, I will say that the tops of the roof where it comes to the triangle shape looks jagged (pixelated) but I printed this picture on Photo paper and its not like that when printed .

Mar 11, 2006, 6:07 PM	#4
julies517 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 851	i'll say it again...very cool atmospheric image- spoooky

Mar 11, 2006, 6:29 PM	#5
TD Cole Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 1,498	Very cool shot and I think the white halo so to speak is the clouds passing by on this time exposure:-)

Mar 15, 2006, 10:41 AM	#7
LadyhawkVA Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,374	I like the second, but is your horizon just slightly tilted? The building seems to be leaning a bit.

Mar 15, 2006, 12:41 PM	#8
oBSidian Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 216	This is a lovely shot. Only thing I have to add to what's already been said is that for me, the crop is a little too tight around the building. Now, I wasn't there, so there's probably good reason - ugly things next to it, for e.g. - but if you could afford to give it a bit more context at the sides, I think it'd work even better! If it were short exposure, I'd say try a pano, with the camera in portrait orientation. But with long exposures and that sky, that'd be tough! lol. Best, -Ben

Mar 15, 2006, 12:48 PM	#9
KENNETHD Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 1,724	Very good shot... Kd