My brother and his daughter

[toothlesrooster]

It's been a while since I've been able to post, butI thought I'd share this shot. I took a couple of out door portraits for my brother and his daughter. I have quite a few that turned out quite nice (In my opinion) but this is my favorite. Let me know what you guys think! The only thing I can see that I didn't like is that on the original you can see a bit of blur (just barley) on her hands as she was fidgiting. Thanks in advance guys.

[twofruitz]

here is my attemp at it, i would personally like to see a horizontal crop and some more contrast.

tell me what you think.