Hello fairy_basslet,
Welcome to the forum
Your photo truly resonates with me. My late grandparents had hardscrabble roots just as this noble woman does.
The sagging lines of the home suggest not neglect which is an easy answer but rather are reflective of the hard choicesshe must make as she leads the life that she does.
I did a minor tweak of it...I am not sure it is any better than yours. My intent was to bring a lil more attention to the woman and to emphasize the gentle, sagging lines of decay of her home, perhaps a visual metaphor on her life.