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E.S. Crawford · Jan 27, 2006, 12:57 AM

new girl interest inspired new outlook.

heading the right direction?

E.S. Crawford · Jan 27, 2006, 12:11 PM

and at the green light...

VAtechtigger · Jan 27, 2006, 12:31 PM

I think there is just to much going on here. The color is all yellow and the tilt/lens distortion is a bit distracting. When im going for the light trail, you really need to have some traffic to get the effect. I guess there is just nothing that stands out as that interesting here for me.

E.S. Crawford · Jan 27, 2006, 12:46 PM

well, in defence of the yellow, unfortunately , the actual building is kind of an

ochre/yellow, the "shooting star" lights tails are yellow, the lines in the street were

yellow and, in the case of the second shot, the stupid car was also yellow.

wrong area to shoot if you don't like the color yellow.

as for the light trail, my camera only has a 2 second delay max, so unless i am in rush

hour, or the guy is doing sixty, i'm stuck with the short light trails.

i was actually intrigued by the building itself, the shape of it and the way the tree seems

almopst one dimentional growing up the side, and not so much the traffic.

unfortunately, though not that buisy, i was constantly plagued by cars.

i'll try and reshoot without the autos.

scot

julies517 · Jan 27, 2006, 12:52 PM

i am glad there is "new girl interest"

VAtechtigger · Jan 27, 2006, 1:03 PM

looks to be of similar shape to the famous Flatiron buiolding in NYC. you can see it here

http://www.andrewprokos.com/Qstore/Q...C01060144925C1

E.S. Crawford · Jan 27, 2006, 1:29 PM

uh oh!

it looks like tully's coffee is looking foreward to a fat lawsuit!!! :-)
(their coffee sucks, anyway!)

scot

Hards80 · Jan 27, 2006, 2:21 PM

i'd like to have something in the foreground.. not sure what, maybe someone walking by with an umbrella..
style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"
style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"your white balance does appear off, and if you look, your shot is tilted clockwise a few degrees as well..
style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"
style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"would be worth a revisit and some new angles i think
style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"
style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"-dustin

E.S. Crawford · Jan 27, 2006, 5:04 PM

yeah, your right.

i was pressed for time, though and it was in the low thirties and i forgot me gloves! :O

anyway, i think i'll try quite a few more angles and maybe i can convince jessica to be

the one with the umbrella!

wish me luck! (on both accounts)

scot

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Jan 27, 2006, 12:31 PM	#3
VAtechtigger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 570	I think there is just to much going on here. The color is all yellow and the tilt/lens distortion is a bit distracting. When im going for the light trail, you really need to have some traffic to get the effect. I guess there is just nothing that stands out as that interesting here for me.

Jan 27, 2006, 12:46 PM	#4
E.S. Crawford Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 911	well, in defence of the yellow, unfortunately , the actual building is kind of an ochre/yellow, the "shooting star" lights tails are yellow, the lines in the street were yellow and, in the case of the second shot, the stupid car was also yellow. wrong area to shoot if you don't like the color yellow. as for the light trail, my camera only has a 2 second delay max, so unless i am in rush hour, or the guy is doing sixty, i'm stuck with the short light trails. i was actually intrigued by the building itself, the shape of it and the way the tree seems almopst one dimentional growing up the side, and not so much the traffic. unfortunately, though not that buisy, i was constantly plagued by cars. i'll try and reshoot without the autos. scot

Jan 27, 2006, 12:52 PM	#5
julies517 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 851	i am glad there is "new girl interest"

Jan 27, 2006, 1:03 PM	#6
VAtechtigger Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 570	looks to be of similar shape to the famous Flatiron buiolding in NYC. you can see it here http://www.andrewprokos.com/Qstore/Q...C01060144925C1

Jan 27, 2006, 1:29 PM	#7
E.S. Crawford Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 911	uh oh! it looks like tully's coffee is looking foreward to a fat lawsuit!!! :-) (their coffee sucks, anyway!) scot

Jan 27, 2006, 2:21 PM	#8
Hards80 Super Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Cleveland, OH Posts: 9,046	i'd like to have something in the foreground.. not sure what, maybe someone walking by with an umbrella.. style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"your white balance does appear off, and if you look, your shot is tilted clockwise a few degrees as well.. style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"would be worth a revisit and some new angles i think style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000" style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"-dustin

Jan 27, 2006, 5:04 PM	#9
E.S. Crawford Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 911	yeah, your right. i was pressed for time, though and it was in the low thirties and i forgot me gloves! :O anyway, i think i'll try quite a few more angles and maybe i can convince jessica to be the one with the umbrella! wish me luck! (on both accounts) scot