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Just a closeup of a golf green.
Best regards, Mag |
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I like the concept and the composition. Personally, I would prefer either a little more or a little less DOF. As it is the flag is almostin focus, and my eyes seem to want to make up the difference, whereas if it were "properly" blurred, my eyes would just accept it. But... that is a very minor point, not a harsh criticism.
I like the general idea you have. Because of the layout, you have lots of opportunity to experiments with the angles of the flag and the shadow. I hope you took others; this would fit in well in a series. Cheers, Tom, on Point Pelee, Canada http://tomoverton.myphotoalbum.com |
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i would like to see the flag sharp.. since its a major player in this shot.. this is a cool concept and a different view of something many see every day.. nice eye..
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Thanks alot for your input Tom and Hards, it helps alot. Heres a slight edit but a revisit to the course should prove better.
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