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Aumma45 Oct 29, 2005 3:06 AM

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I was trying out the subject of patterns. Wonder whether I have made sense of it. Comments will do. Kind regards.

thatsanicepicture2 Oct 29, 2005 10:00 PM

A,

Hmmm. 1/60th. Did you take that hand held? If so your a lot more steady then I am.

I think this a nice picture, but the crop is a little tight. Did you take any different angles?

dale

julies517 Oct 29, 2005 10:13 PM

i agree that the crop is a little tight, but i think if i saw this hanging on a wall, i would find it quite interesting.

E.S. Crawford Oct 29, 2005 10:23 PM

very crisp. love it!

Aumma45 Oct 29, 2005 11:37 PM

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Oh thanks folks for putting this huge smile on my face. You comments and remarks really mean I am getting somewhere. About the crop which seems too tight, I decided to put the original. I have fiddle a bit with the contrast. Is this a better one then?

Again, thank Dale, Crawford and Julies:-)

Patrick.



E.S. Crawford Oct 30, 2005 12:03 AM

i like the crop better, but i am also a big fan of abstract. you were shooting for pattern? i think the crop hit's the mark.


scot

Aumma45 Oct 30, 2005 12:06 AM

That is right Scot, I was shooting for patterns and want it tight to bring out the pattern. Thanks for looking.

Patrick.

thatsanicepicture2 Oct 30, 2005 8:50 PM

With the picture as it is the first crop is better.

Very nice

dale





Aumma45 Oct 30, 2005 9:38 PM

Dale, this was hand held. I am still learning the art of holding a camera steadily. It comes with time. Thanks for looking and kind regards.

Hards80 Oct 31, 2005 12:37 AM

i prefer the first crop.. i think you did a pretty good job here, one of your better efforts to date..
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LadyhawkVA Oct 31, 2005 12:23 PM

I like the cropped shot. The tonal range is very nice. Good job.

Carrots Oct 31, 2005 1:11 PM

Good shot.

I have been watching your work for a while now, since you started about the same time as I have. This is definitely the best I have seen from you to date, and I am sure I will see a lot better from you in the future.

thatsanicepicture2 Oct 31, 2005 8:16 PM

Aumma45 wrote:
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Dale, this was hand held. I am still learning the art of holding a camera steadily.
Here is what I learned about hand holding a camera... I can't do it. I prop, mono pod or tripod when the shutter slows down. Hand holding is a gift... And I ain't got it.

dale

PS: For those learning English and using this website to help you,NEVER REPEAT THAT LAST SENTENCE!



Aumma45 Nov 1, 2005 10:15 PM

Folks,

my presupposition was that learning is a life time phenomena. If all of us had completed the process of learningand were at the zenith of learning, this forum would otherwise be unnecessry. If any one and I mean anyone were to say that he/she does not need any further learning, please do let me know how to get there.. In my langauge we say: "a container that is full needs no further filling. :-):mad:"

Kind regards

Patrick.

Aumma45 Nov 1, 2005 10:25 PM

Indeed, Dustin, LadyhawkVA, Carrot and many others have accompanied me since I joined the forum that is four months ago. I say thank you; your patience and persitence in guiding, advicing, commenting and even outrightly saying a certain photo does not appeal to you is paying off.

The satisfaction that you are elevating someone to the heights of good photography should put a smile on your face. Indeed grateful for appreciating the patterns.

Kind regards

Patrick.


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