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clem May 19, 2005 8:16 AM

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Critique... but be gentle. The scaled down version isn't sharp, but the proper one is

headhunter66 May 19, 2005 12:05 PM

I like it, very nice shot.

Dave Porter

gwei May 19, 2005 6:39 PM

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Very nice photo. As to the critiques side, I have the feeling that the composition isunbalanced and the colorneeds bit sdjustment. Probably something like this:

thatsanicepicture2 May 20, 2005 8:11 AM

clem wrote:
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Critique... but be gentle. The scaled down version isn't sharp, but the proper one is
That's a nice picture. The city skyline and clouds curving together really makes this
picture.

Nice color... Is it a morning shot?

Is this a stitch or a crop?

Nice work
dale





clem May 20, 2005 8:56 AM

headhunter66
thanx for the comment. I like it better than the other 70+ shots of the same scene.

gwei
I've thought about balancing the picture, and i don't even know how u did what you just did. nice work by the way. I decided not to add clouds to the right side of the picture because i thought it showed the transition from the hectic city area to the more serene outskirts. I did wait for the clouds to move to that area, but it got too dark by then =)

thatsanicepicture2
It is actually a sunset shot with the white balance set to about 6800 and post-pic tinting. This picture was a crop. and i took off some of the more unsightly areas at the bottom and the sky without the clouds at the top. I thought that a wider picture gives it a nice peaceful landscape feel

aladyforty May 20, 2005 9:48 AM

nice shot, I presume this was taken from Kings park, I have not been to perth for some time, what is that flat white roofing in front of the sky scrapers?

RodneyBlair May 20, 2005 12:28 PM

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Colors look good, but the image needs more clarity. An increase in contrast and some moderate sharpening will do nicely. You'll get more impact if you work with the individual color channels.

Rodney

Bagsfan5 May 20, 2005 3:44 PM

Great shot. I feel that it is a little Blue/Purple.... It could use a little contrast.... Thanks for sharing the wonderful picture with us....

clem May 20, 2005 10:50 PM

aladyforty
That white roof structure is the new convention centre. Recently there was a car show there and it looked way better than when it was held in the Burswood dome

RodneyBlair
Thanx for that. Will definitely try the individual colour channels. I'm not sure exactly how to, but i'll experiment and see how it goes.

Bagsfan5
Thanx for the comment. I'll push up the contrast a tad. After seeing Rodney's adjustment, i also agree with u that increased contrast is the way to go


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