Portrait of my fiance

[ZAKD]

#1 is just wanderfull.....Love it...... #2 is way different and far away from #1.

Zak

[RodneyBlair]

Hello John,

You have a lovely model to work with. Both poses are a bit awkward. A different camera position can sometimes make a difference.

In the first image, I think the missing arm needs to be visible. When we show one and not the other, it looks odd. In the #2 she seems to have no shoulders. Neither image flatters your model's neck. I like to see nice long necks.

Images are slightly under exposed and are dull and boring. No problem though because you manipulated the light well and it can be adjusted in post as you like. I'll provide a quick edit to demonstrate. Notice that I have also whitened the teeth and sharpened slightly.

Thanks for sharing.

Rodney Blair