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Walter C Mar 1, 2013 2:01 AM

Profile of a clarinetist
 
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A high school student warms up before performing at last year's Veterans Day ceremonies.

wave01 Mar 1, 2013 3:30 AM

Hi my first impression is that the top is far to white im drawn to that instead of the girl.

Ozzie_Traveller Mar 1, 2013 3:01 PM

G'day Walter

I think this is a magic shot .... 10/10
Q- have you considered a square shape to concentrate the eye 'just' on the face & hair?

Regards, Phil

Walter C Mar 1, 2013 3:41 PM

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How's this, Phil?

flasha Mar 2, 2013 4:43 AM

Agreed the second one much more effective and like it a lot.

wave01 Mar 2, 2013 7:14 AM

yes thats better

Photo 5 Mar 2, 2013 11:55 AM

The second one is much better

Ozzie_Traveller Mar 2, 2013 3:36 PM

G'day Walter

12/10

Phil

Calicajun Mar 4, 2013 10:08 AM

Great capture and wonderful processing.


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