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jopeter Aug 15, 2014 8:17 PM

Red
 
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Red furniture on green grass at Mario's

Calicajun Aug 17, 2014 2:49 PM

Like the shot but the background needs to be cleaned up.

schmintan Aug 24, 2014 5:41 PM

Unfortunately the composition doesnt work for me at all. I like the contrasting colors, but the angle its taken at makes it look like just a table and benches on a lawn, and doesnt really draw attention to the colors.

if the lines of the table were used to help composition it might help a bit, along with getting in closer to give better bokeh.


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