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johnsonM86 Oct 22, 2005 12:14 AM

this one i liked better, and so did someone else.

http://i.pbase.com/v3/15/552515/2/50382381.10.jpg

-mike j-
www.pbase.com/mikej86

Aumma45 Oct 22, 2005 2:08 AM

The effort is visible, but what are you trying to achieve in this photo if I may kindly ask? Thanks.

Hards80 Oct 22, 2005 6:43 PM

i like the diagnol lines and the contrast between the color and black and white.. i would clone out the dead spot on the upper right corner just to improve the symmetry.. very abstract, but i like it..

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dustin

www.hardwickphotos.com

johnsonM86 Oct 22, 2005 7:29 PM

Aumma, i'm not trying to "achieve" anything necessarily here. i dont really like to look at photography that way and i think it's limiting. to stretch your question i suppose you could say i'm trying to "achieve" a nice photo of water drops on a leaf. i hope that answers your question.


waste Oct 23, 2005 12:39 AM

i liked it very much. But the top portion of the leaf in the frame looks not that sharp compared to the other parts. And i would leve the dead spot as it is. It some kinda adds some interest to the photo.

style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"Only thing i felt is uniform sharpness for such a wonderful idea would have been different.

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style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"vivek

Aumma45 Oct 23, 2005 12:45 AM

I did notice the fact that the photo is very abstract and makes a very interesting subject. The colour contrast seems to work too especially along the line of symmetry. Sometimes when we ask a question like the one I asked above, it is not so much for you the photographer but for us who are looking, admiring, critiquing, learning, etc from your photo. Indeed I like you answer. Sometimes where you heart is, there is where you treasure is. Was't trying to make it simplistic, was trying to learn from you. Kind regards.

Patrick.


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