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scorpionfish Mar 25, 2006 5:27 AM

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i am not sure about this... how it look to you guys, it was taken during my desert travel adventure with my friends.



thanks
scorpion

scorpionfish Mar 25, 2006 5:28 AM

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how about this one??? hope you like it.

kenmck15 Mar 25, 2006 5:37 AM

i really like shot 2. i think in this case a greater dof would have added more impact to this shot.

great lines leading into the horizon btw.also nice level of detail in the sand.



ken



Log Mar 26, 2006 3:25 PM

i also like both shots:|, especially number 2.:cool:

what camera/lens did you use?

regards

-logan

Mark1616 Mar 28, 2006 10:45 AM

Looking at the Exif

Make = OLYMPUS OPTICAL CO.,LTD
Model = C5050Z
Orientation = top/left
Software = Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
Date Time = 2006-03-25 03:19:24

[Camera]
Exposure Time = 1/800"
F Number = F5.6


I use Opanda iExif which is great and there is a free download version. All you do is right click on any pic and if the Exif is there you will be able to see it.

BTW I like the second one as well, but would have been stronger with a greater DOF.

Mark.

SteveDak Mar 28, 2006 12:39 PM

Also like no2 in terms of composition

oBSidian Mar 28, 2006 1:05 PM

The second is very nice compositionally. Would prefer to see a greater DOF as others have mentioned. I'd also like to see a slightly less tight crop. I'm a stickler for the rule of thirds in most cases, and would love to see the leading line starting on the right-hand third, and ending on the left hand one.

Still, a nice capture.

Best,

-Ben

LadyhawkVA Mar 28, 2006 1:45 PM

I love the strong lines in both. The composition of #2 is better; in #1 the peak of the dune is uncomfortably close to the top edge.

scorpionfish Mar 30, 2006 4:42 AM

thanks guys for the appreciation it put me more courage.sorry for the late respnose i just get back from out of town. thanks for sharing your idea.

mark was right about the cam i used and how to figure out.
Make = OLYMPUS
Model = C5050Z


scorpion


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