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i usually don't like waterscapes in grey scale, but the uncooperative weather
has made shots few and far between. i have been playing around with a few different mediums, and this b&w watershot is one of my projects. does it work? |
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its a little too centered i think... and i am not keen on hte glow coming from behind the trees.. and its really just a lot of midtone grey.. i think that the project is worth continuing as it will look very nice when you get it right, this just isnt quite it..
-------- dustin www.hardwickphotos.com |
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Hi,
I myself don't think this is too far away and I do quite like the glow (maybe slightly overdone but not by much). The only thing that I don't like is the area of trees across the middle of the shot on the right - to me it looks like they were pasted on - it does spoil it for me - very flat "battleship grey". Maybe try and add some grain? Dom |
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Hmmm!
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ESC
I think the grey on the right side is too flat. Looks PS'ed over even if it isn't. Lopeside the picture. dale |
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I'd say back to the drawing table. I don't know what you did but don't do it again
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time for me to finally get back to this shot.
i completely forgot that i had even posted it! :? so here it is. i actually didn't do anything to this one but go greyscale. i moved on to something else and haven't worked on this at all, yet. here is the original. any suggestions on how to make this bad shot decent would be great. i will try and make some time to get this one right 'cause i feel, with the right touches, it has some potential. thanks, guys for the help! scot |
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Gosh... I like this a lot better.
dale |
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can you believe that the color is natural?
this is one of a series of shots, and the only one to come out with this particular color pattern. i felt that it was rather flat when first viewed. and i think your right, dale. mucho better than the b&w travisty. let me see if i can make it even more palattable... scot |
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I like both the shots, they both have good points, I am going to post 2 reworks. I am not sure they are better, but they are different.
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