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In search of Syd Jan 27, 2006 4:05 AM

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Just experimenting again. Just can't seem to get to grips with the levels and curves with this one.

Go on . . . rip it to shreds . . . I've got plenty more . . .

In search of Syd Jan 27, 2006 5:23 AM

LBoysaid:

"I would suggest to newcomers that are not receiving much feedback, (and as I have done in the past), is to go ahead and bump their post up to the top, with a further request for attention."

Hahum!

LBoy Jan 27, 2006 6:29 AM

I quite like this. Another good one.

I would clone out the lower yellow light and leave in the one above.

I would correct the barrel distortion which is bowing the outer edge of the building.

Reduce the blown hightlight selectively in the sky. Maybe even totally remove and add a new one. If you loved it enough for that !

Also would sharpen a bit more.




LBoy Jan 27, 2006 6:29 AM

LBoy also said....

Post at most your two best shots per week, so it gives all a chance of some decent response and critique....
Plus you only posted this today, along with the other 3 or 4. :-):-)

Quote:

Go on . . . rip it to shreds . . . I've got plenty more . . .
I dont think we are getting through..... are we Syd...? :G:?





Hards80 Jan 27, 2006 10:03 AM

i agree with the lights and the sky.. should be easy enough to correct... good perspective here.. i think this one and the elevator would be a nice start on a perspective study..

-dustin

DomCotton Jan 27, 2006 11:12 AM

LBoy wrote:
Quote:

I would correct the barrel distortion which is bowing the outer edge of the building.
Hey LB,

To pre-empt what I guess Syd will ask (unless he already knows) so how do you go about doing that then?

Thanks,

Dom

p.s. Is that you in the avatar? You look like martine mccutcheon (except i cant spell!) Great pic


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