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digcamfan · Mar 16, 2006, 6:46 PM

Tranquility Trestle

Aumma45 · Mar 16, 2006, 11:29 PM

Nice reflection and colours but I think for a bridge the crop is too tight. Regards. Jaki

kenmck15 · Mar 17, 2006, 1:38 AM

cool composition, i like the vanishing effect. nicely composed. you made a very nice shot of this.

ken

shadowlies · Mar 17, 2006, 6:49 AM

Nice reflection in the water. In regards to what Jaki said I agree, the crop might be a little too tight.

Here is a rough edit (and it really is rough!) to add a bit more sky. I don't know how much you cropped or if this part of your image is missing all together.

Keep up the good work.

digcamfan · Mar 18, 2006, 7:12 AM

Thanks much, Jaki, Ken and shadowlies for your feedback

Yes, in retrospect ("retro 'vision' ") the crop is too tight. That is the wonder and benefit of asking for others for their take on a photograph.

FYI, I cropped tight to eliminate some distracting elements on the left (and also used scratch removal to remove some power lines).

Of course, given that the sun was low on horizon, about an hour before sundown, and the sun's rays were almost perpendicular to the horizontal axis of the bridge I coulda just walked acrossed the bridge and shot the pic from the other side!

Just another reason to return to a nice subject

Also, thought I was aware of perspective (like seeing railroad tracks seeming to merge in the distance)I did not consider the use of vanishing effect for this photo.

Soooooo...in a word, I learned heaps from all of you!

You have given me some great :idea:s

Thank you!

Thank you too, shadowlies, for a wonderful edit. It is definitely an improvement!

Digcamfan

LadyhawkVA · Mar 21, 2006, 1:50 PM

This is a nice subject.

I'd like to see more of it: different angles, different lighting, different details - - - that's not much to ask, it? :!: :?

The edited version is nice too - the extra bit of sky works nicely.

Mar 16, 2006, 6:46 PM	#1
digcamfan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 3,422	Tranquility Trestle Attached Images

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shadowlies Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 251	Nice reflection in the water. In regards to what Jaki said I agree, the crop might be a little too tight. Here is a rough edit (and it really is rough!) to add a bit more sky. I don't know how much you cropped or if this part of your image is missing all together. Keep up the good work. Attached Images

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Mar 16, 2006, 11:29 PM	#2
Aumma45 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 1,940	Nice reflection and colours but I think for a bridge the crop is too tight. Regards. Jaki

Mar 17, 2006, 1:38 AM	#3
kenmck15 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 2,568	cool composition, i like the vanishing effect. nicely composed. you made a very nice shot of this. ken

Mar 18, 2006, 7:12 AM	#5
digcamfan Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Posts: 3,422	Thanks much, Jaki, Ken and shadowlies for your feedback Yes, in retrospect ("retro 'vision' ") the crop is too tight. That is the wonder and benefit of asking for others for their take on a photograph. FYI, I cropped tight to eliminate some distracting elements on the left (and also used scratch removal to remove some power lines). Of course, given that the sun was low on horizon, about an hour before sundown, and the sun's rays were almost perpendicular to the horizontal axis of the bridge I coulda just walked acrossed the bridge and shot the pic from the other side! Just another reason to return to a nice subject Also, thought I was aware of perspective (like seeing railroad tracks seeming to merge in the distance)I did not consider the use of vanishing effect for this photo. Soooooo...in a word, I learned heaps from all of you! You have given me some great :idea:s Thank you! Thank you too, shadowlies, for a wonderful edit. It is definitely an improvement! Digcamfan

Mar 21, 2006, 1:50 PM	#6
LadyhawkVA Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,374	This is a nice subject. I'd like to see more of it: different angles, different lighting, different details - - - that's not much to ask, it? :!: :? The edited version is nice too - the extra bit of sky works nicely.