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johnsonM86 Apr 15, 2006 7:17 PM

does this work?

any suggestions on how better to arrange them or whether borders are necessary or not?

http://i.pbase.com/g3/15/552515/2/58...lonialjpeg.jpg

-mj-
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Hawgwild Apr 15, 2006 10:33 PM

I've been there and seen this, and you have captured it perfectly, in my opinion. I really like the way you have sequenced the firing of the cannon. This series should be in a tourist magazine! Good job! Robert

RedRhino Apr 16, 2006 7:59 AM

Hi Mike,

Nice executed. I think this presentation really ties the series together quite nicely.

At first, I thought cropping the first shot to match the others might be a very slight improvement but I think this actually works better. I think the cropping actually reinforces that this is the first image in the series 'Look at me I'm different'

One very slight thing, The top 2 images are slightly darker than the bottom two if you look at the detail in the brick.:|Nicely done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





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