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Wedding Photo - How to improve?
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Jun 12, 2012, 11:46 PM
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You're kidding, right? This is an excellent photo, and the bride and groom would be thrilled with it. I can't see how to improve on it.
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Jun 13, 2012, 4:23 PM
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The reflected hands/fingers stand out to me. Maybe clean them in PP?
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Jun 14, 2012, 10:32 PM
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Had to look long and hard to find something to improve. Try adding a little color to the small bit of sky, its a little blow out.
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Jun 18, 2012, 2:49 PM
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Apart from the blown-out sky, this image is beautiful!
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like the engagement photo I think this one could be cropped a bit as well. The shot is lovely but for a wedding photo the couple needs to be the focal point, the way this is now I am not sure if it is the stairs or the car or them.
Also I am not sure if the stairs are curved or if that is lens distortion, if it is lens distortion I would see if it can be corrected as it is a little distracting. The car and the stairs both form lines of perspective, by those lines being bent on the stairs it makes it look like a fisheye effect... just my .02 on improving what is really already an excellent image
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I still have to learn how to replace the sky.... )
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Oct 13, 2012, 11:40 PM
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MWP, hope you don't mind. I did a quick crop, then colored the sky in PSE, total of about 2 minutes. You could take more time and do a much better job, but this was pretty easy. Not all are.
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Oct 30, 2012, 3:02 PM
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I like this. Cropped and removed lamp and bright sky.
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