Where the ley lines pass by

[In search of Syd]

I love this place . . .

[BrianSkibinski]

This one looks a little fake for my taste. The foreground looks overprocessed while the background looks natural. I would either process the whole thing to look a little fake or keep it all natural looking. I also think it could have been benefited from the rule of thirds.

[Aumma45]

I agree. You don't need to be a specialist to see all the has been pointed out especially emphatically the fakeness of it. Sorry buddy. But the theme is excellent.

Kind regards.

Jaki.

[vIZnquest]

BrianSkibinski wrote:

This one looks a little fake for my taste. The foreground looks overprocessed while the background looks natural. I would either process the whole thing to look a little fake or keep it all natural looking. I also think it could have been benefited from the rule of thirds.

Are you kidding? Guess not. Explain your rule of thirds next time since this is a critique for helping and not just trashing a post as you come off.


Possibly reshoot this with the hill a bit more to the right or left can give this a bit more impact.


The PP as mentioned from quote is not what I see here.

[In search of Syd]

Hows this?

[In search of Syd]

or this?

[In search of Syd]

or even this?

[Hards80]

here is what i did

-cropped to make use of lead-in lines from fence and tractore trail

-levels edit to take out haze look

-boost in saturation and contrast

-very mild sharpening

[In search of Syd]

Now. that is much better! Thanks Dustin. I like the crop and the lead in. I do like big skies.

[Aumma45]

This last one is very good. If you look at it carefully the rule of the third is followed. There is a sense of proportionality balance in colour and generally pleasing to look at. Bravo.