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Old Oct 17, 2006, 3:34 PM   #1
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C&C welcome, this is a bit of a departure for me



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Old Oct 18, 2006, 9:26 AM   #2
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Hi,

I find myself wondering what is in that building with all the light spilling out of it... however I also find the gate isnt really leading me to it, its just a little distracting really. I would opt for either one or the other in the shot.

Nice mysterious shot, maybe lean on that gate next time and give me some more of that building?

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Old Oct 18, 2006, 11:44 AM   #3
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very good feedback dj, I originally thought the gate was essential to the shot, but now I see what you mean.

I'll be back there at the end of the month around the same time, so I will try it again! I just hope they leave the lights on again...

Thanks!

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Old Oct 19, 2006, 5:30 AM   #4
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i actually really like this shot

i think comp is cool. i think if there was more dynamic lightng some how, maybe street lamp etc.

i like how the odd coloured light i placed

i like it

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