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Old Oct 17, 2006, 2:42 PM   #1
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Saw this yesterday at a local beach. Please tell me what you think.
You will have to excuse the sky. There was none. It was over cast.


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Old Oct 18, 2006, 8:27 AM   #2
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Hi,

Aside from the sky which you have mentioned, that post and barb wire just has to go! It is so distracting!

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Old Oct 18, 2006, 2:22 PM   #3
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Tryed cropping it down. Messed about with the sky and I thought I would try it in B&W.



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Old Oct 19, 2006, 3:57 AM   #4
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i think shot has tons of potential

I think its a nice capture.

I dont really like the placement of the post and i do also think the wire is distracting in this context. Maybe a different composition would make it work.

I also find the purple fringing a bit distracting too



like i mentiond, i think there is tons of potential

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Had another play about what do you think now.



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Old Oct 24, 2006, 1:50 PM   #6
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i think this is a significnat imporvement amte, nice ps work. Maybe try your b&w convesion. I really like that

nice work mate. Your pp skills are very good

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Old Oct 24, 2006, 2:37 PM   #7
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Here it is in B+W. Cheers Ken.



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very nice mate

i think in this instance the b&w wotks nicer. the absence of the fence works wonders

nicely done

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