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Old Oct 24, 2006, 4:31 AM   #11
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kenmck15 wrote:
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shot 2 is great

maybe clone out that little chair in the backing

lovely shots mate

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G'day Ken!

Not sure if you meant the chair in the 2nd photo.. .I already cloned out the chair of photo 2 (b&w) in the 2nd edit... (is it that late in NZ? :G)

Or if you meant get rid of the chair in the 3rd photo... here it is...

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Old Oct 24, 2006, 4:35 AM   #12
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much more better :-) than the first one Paul , but I would crop a 10 to 15% from the left side of the picture, that would place you guy's more in 2/3 spot on the picture, now the beach is so big that it is a bit distracting - Ronny
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Hi... it looks like we're getting there... little by little with everyone's input, etc.

Reminds me of a tent and forest landscape I had put here in this forum some time ago.. .various folk giving their input/ opinion to get a "collaberated good" result!

So what sayest thou of this edit? :? (with some beach area cropped off the left)!???

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Old Oct 24, 2006, 6:24 AM   #13
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Paul, imho I don't think it can get better than this one - Ronny
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Old Oct 24, 2006, 7:17 AM   #14
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Paul, imho I don't think it can get better than this one - Ronny
Thanks Ronny for your valued input and for kindly appreciating the last shot!

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Old Oct 24, 2006, 12:54 PM   #15
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I'd agree with ronny about the latest version, chair clonned out and the frame cropped to bring the happy couple in the 1/3's area.

About the B&W, the chair became a distracting element only after you mentioned about it Still, better when clonned out. The blown part of the T shirt even gives a hi-key effect ! Very good job, successfully conveying theunderlyingsentiment, IMO
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Old Oct 24, 2006, 2:09 PM   #16
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Hello Bahadir,

Glad you liked the latest version too!

Sometimes mentioning things can be dangerous... i.e. the "distracting" chair getting noticed in the B&W photo... :-)

I appreciate your positive note that the blown part of the t-shirt even giving a hi-key effect, wow! Thanks for your comments, as always.

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