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Old Dec 24, 2006, 6:34 AM   #1
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I really need lots critiques and comments...Thanks alot

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Old Dec 24, 2006, 1:46 PM   #2
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Excellent shot, my only comment deals with behind her head on the left. The red object is a little distracting. Exposure, lighting and sharpness are excellent.

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Old Dec 24, 2006, 6:19 PM   #3
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It's a good shot.

You could have used a reflector or a little fill flash to throw just a little more light on her face.

But basically its a good shot!
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Old Dec 24, 2006, 7:11 PM   #4
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Yep good shot with great framing. Apart from getting a little more light on the face (for which I would choose a reflector if possible) the skill is getting your subject to relax as she looks a little rigid...... something I have not mastered.

You might also consider opening up the aperture a little as this was at f7.1 so go for something like f4 (looking at the exif you were at 44mm so you should be able to get f4 or even f3.5) which will throw the background out even more making your subject even more punch.
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