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Old Jan 12, 2007, 1:24 PM   #1
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I clicked this while we were driving back from Vermont. Comments please
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Old Jan 12, 2007, 7:03 PM   #2
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The lens flare or dirt on the glass you are shooting through has not helped this out. I would suggest a crop similar to below which helps this out. Looks like you have some beautiful scenery to shoot in!
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Old Jan 12, 2007, 7:42 PM   #3
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Yeah the crop fixes this shot pretty well. Although I have to say that the scene looks awfully dismal and bleak. Even lonely. A figure in the shot just sitting there doing nothing would add heaps to this shot.

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Old Jan 13, 2007, 1:49 PM   #4
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i do prefer the sharpend version. you have used a very safe comp on this shot and i think with a main subject with limited form it needs something to help it dominate the frame and draw the eye in.

could be tigher crop, selective colouring or soething. i think as is, the subject is not strong enough and it seems to be drowning out in the shot as is,

even reshooting with a very dynamic angle leading down the side of the table into the trees and snow may work also or something like tht

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