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Old Jan 18, 2007, 9:16 PM   #1
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this is my first attempt at portraits.......please i need c&c thanks randy
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Old Jan 18, 2007, 9:30 PM   #2
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Nice portrait rt.....
Just a bit bothered with the shadow...Try your best to keep the flash on top of your lens...If you shoot landscape you shouldnt have to much of a problem, unless your shooting at an angle...If you shoot portrait, you will get terrible shadows unless you use a flash bracket....A little hint....Next time, have your subject turned a little...Straight into the camera (squared shoulders) gives you the football full back look...
Nice composition with the fire and the plant....
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Old Jan 18, 2007, 10:44 PM   #3
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I love the background. It's very nice and crisp. The only thing I would change is that I would crop in on the subject a little more. Mind if I have a go?
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Old Jan 19, 2007, 6:21 PM   #4
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thank you both for comments... i have learned so much from all of you .....yes i like the crop thanks again
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Old Jan 20, 2007, 10:09 AM   #5
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I like the crop much better. i found my eye beign distracted by the black image on the right.
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