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Old Jan 21, 2007, 2:01 PM   #1
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Need your C&C to improve my shooting...plz. say something ...
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Old Jan 21, 2007, 5:21 PM   #2
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I really like this shot. The only thing i immediately see is that you'd probably be better served by shooting at a smaller F stop (smaller f number) to blur the background better. this way the focus is more on the main subject.
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Old Jan 21, 2007, 5:32 PM   #3
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I also like this shot, someone is looking very happy and probably wants to get on the lawn mower (I think that is what it is) and have a ride.

Soliz, I don't think the aperture can be any wider in the Sony P-200 at that focal length. It is 15.1mm and f4 which sits about right in the range on that camera. R1 the only way you might get more of the background blurred is to zoom as much as possible so you are standing slightly further away and see what that does for you.
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Old Jan 22, 2007, 1:26 AM   #4
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nice shot

as mentioned a lower fstop to seperate your subject and backing a bit better. also the shot seems a bit over sharpened, it could be due to the resizing for this website

its a good shot

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Old Jan 22, 2007, 11:04 PM   #5
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If the Moderators don't mind I will keep upload some more of my photos here , Thank you very much about all of your C&C...next one is " THE DEAD OF A LEAF "


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Old Jan 22, 2007, 11:07 PM   #6
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...And " The Fire Works "...
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Old Jan 22, 2007, 11:21 PM   #7
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"MY LIMBS"


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Old Jan 23, 2007, 12:36 AM   #8
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I like the fireworks one.
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Old Jan 23, 2007, 4:14 AM   #9
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thanks rockstarb8, at your first post I also like the "Fire Work" also thanks ...soliz39, Mark1616and kenmck15... anybody else, plz. say something.....
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