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Old Mar 5, 2007, 11:12 PM   #1
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Hi,I was asked to tag along and take some pics at a weddind last weekend.Any help as to how I could improve these two shotsappreciated.
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Old Mar 5, 2007, 11:13 PM   #2
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And the 2nd
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Old Mar 5, 2007, 11:34 PM   #3
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i quite like the comp in this shot. maybe a bit more backing and a little less ground would set this shot up nicely

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I like this shot. comp is very cool. only thing i would sugget is straightening the horizon. it seems to be leaning left.

both shots are great. nice job

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Old Mar 5, 2007, 11:42 PM   #4
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i agree with ken about the ground in the first pic. the dead space is doing nothing for the pic, might as well crop it out! maybe a tighter crop in the second as well, and tweaking the curves might help bring it out a bit more. I like the composition of the second a lot.

nice shots!!
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Old Mar 6, 2007, 3:16 AM   #5
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Did you use a wide angle lens....???."I new concept" for me.Everything is nice displayed.Bride & bridegoom have given an excellent pose,so do the best man and brides maid
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Old Mar 6, 2007, 4:30 PM   #6
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Thanks all.The reason for the dead space at the bottom of the first was there were a number of people there taking pics and if I had moved in a couple of steps closer I would be in their way.

and mcliu,Yes I used Canon 10-22 wide angle.
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Old Mar 10, 2007, 8:56 PM   #7
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If you delete the photos, there's no point to this thread...

Sorry mate, but please leave the images on.
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