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Old Mar 12, 2007, 4:44 AM   #1
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Messing around with words and light some C&C would be greatful.




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Old Mar 12, 2007, 6:07 AM   #2
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Hi Neil, I like this shot alot, only problem is to me the writing seems black and the ink blob from the fountain pen is blue....Try and match it up it'll look more althentic..!!

Great Job

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Old Mar 12, 2007, 7:03 AM   #3
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Thanks Andrew but the writing is blue. It just looks black here I dont know why.



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Old Mar 13, 2007, 1:10 AM   #4
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Neil Wharton,Nice image very piogent(??).handwriting is beautiful.Whose is it any way.Wrtier too be comlimented
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Hi Neil, I like this shot alot, only problem is to me the writing seems black and the ink blob from the fountain pen is blue....Try and match it up it'll look more althentic..!!

Great Job

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i agree here

i love your lighting its great and indeed the writting is great also. Maybe just burn the pen blotch backa few in pp to deepen the blue out to bring the colours closer together.

great shot

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Old Mar 13, 2007, 1:00 PM   #6
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This is a great shoot!!!
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Thanks Guys.


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Old Mar 13, 2007, 2:27 PM   #8
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Hey Neil, Why don't you just try and darken the blue ink blob then it will look fantastic!!!
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Thanks Andrew.


I will try that.



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bravo neil nice shot love the light


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