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Old Apr 19, 2007, 11:41 PM   #1
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Give me some advice. Grade my photo.
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Old Apr 20, 2007, 2:35 AM   #2
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quite a good photo, composition good, I like it.
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Old Apr 20, 2007, 2:39 AM   #3
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Well, i like that the railing works well to draw the eye into the photo. that was executed nicely, and the positioning of the major elements in the photo (railing, background mountain) is good.

You have lost a lot of detail in the snow, resulting in it being blown-out. As well, i find the colours to be a bit drab and so some additional contrast might work well. Here's a quick change. I just readjusted the curves to darken it a little and increase the contrast.
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Old Apr 20, 2007, 7:04 AM   #4
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I like the colors, and the composition (mostly).

I do have one point I'd like to raise. In general, when an image includes a path or a road or a set of train tracks, the viewer's attention is naturally drawn along that path (or road or tracks.) In this photo, you're dragging my attention out behind a tree. The rest of the photo is very nice, but I don't think itcorrects for this.
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Old Apr 20, 2007, 2:06 PM   #5
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Everybody thanks for the advice this was my first photo here. thanks for the edit photo, what a diffrence. Looks good to me.
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