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Old Apr 28, 2007, 6:34 AM   #1
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Hi all

just messing with lightroom from adobe. so far i think its an excellent program.

any thoughts on silo-sh shot of 1tree hill in nz

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Old Apr 28, 2007, 7:29 AM   #2
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It seems that you keep trying to divide my attention. In this shot, both the monument and the grove of trees attract my attention. In your other posts, its the hill and the different foreground ellements.

It's hard for me to figure out what you want me to look at.
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Old Apr 28, 2007, 4:17 PM   #3
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It seems that you keep trying to divide my attention. In this shot, both the monument and the grove of trees attract my attention. In your other posts, its the hill and the different foreground ellements.

It's hard for me to figure out what you want me to look at.
thats great, this is the exaact issue i am having. For some reason i really like the way this shot leads upto the hill with the rough foreground, but i hate those trees. As im sending these shots away i dont want to go and hack the pic up using clone tools and making it look totally different.

taking the shot from more to the left only puts a mass amount of trees in the way on the left which didnt work.

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Old Apr 28, 2007, 4:22 PM   #4
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this is the other comp i played with the try to min those trees
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The second shot is much better because it adds perspective to depth. I also like the sun/shadow against the fence.
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Old May 8, 2007, 1:39 PM   #6
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Maybe it is just me or my monitor, but both seem greatly underexposed.
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Old May 8, 2007, 2:49 PM   #7
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matthew2000tx wrote:
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Maybe it is just me or my monitor, but both seem greatly underexposed.

The images are intentionally dark.

Could be taste, could be monitor, could be both.



Regardless i appreciate your input

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