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Old May 6, 2007, 11:10 PM   #1
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I would like some feedback as to whether this compositon works or not. I love the deep colors but wonder if the composition is interesting enough.
Fire away and let me know what you think. I have thick skin so all comments are welcome.
Hmmm, I just noticed myself that there is an anoying white stem that is distracting my eye in upper right corner. I may have to clone that out. :roll:
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Old May 6, 2007, 11:31 PM   #2
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Steve, I love the foreground color explosion. However, I might have blurred the background a little more since the color of the background flowers is so close to the foreground.(Alternative possibility: lower saturation in back or even competely desaturate?) I think it would make the foreground stand out more. Overall, I really like the photo. You've already noted the distracting stem, lol.


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Old May 7, 2007, 7:43 AM   #3
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Compositional wise ,it is fine ,nothing wrong about .Deep colour of flower also seems to be working with this
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Old May 8, 2007, 10:21 PM   #4
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Thank you Trojansoc and Mcliu for looking.

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