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Old Jun 19, 2007, 5:50 PM   #1
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Which one is best composition-wise? She was an angel, and I wish I had more time to get more shots. Other critiques wlecome! I would really love to take a candid portrait series in the future and need advice.
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Old Jun 19, 2007, 5:51 PM   #2
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Old Jun 19, 2007, 5:52 PM   #3
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Old Jun 19, 2007, 7:26 PM   #4
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The last one works best for me as it is the least obvious you are shooting down at the girl (not usually the best angle) and I also like it as it is not straight which works well in this one. Number one is the next best but number two looks just like a random snap shot so does nothing at all.
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Old Jun 19, 2007, 10:14 PM   #5
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I agree with Mark. #3 is the most pleasing, followed by #1.

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Old Jun 19, 2007, 10:35 PM   #6
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I like #1 but #3 takes the prize
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Old Jun 19, 2007, 10:55 PM   #7
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I like all of them nice work
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Old Jun 20, 2007, 10:35 AM   #8
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i like all of them!

style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"it seems you may have focused on the umbrella as opposed to the

style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #000000"girls face, it seems a little soft! i agree #3 is best!!
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Old Jun 20, 2007, 6:25 PM   #9
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all very nice, thanks for posting
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Old Jun 21, 2007, 9:37 PM   #10
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thanks everyone. #3 is my favorite. and yes, I agree that #2 just looks like a "random snapshot"
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