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Old Jul 12, 2007, 9:28 AM   #1
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Hi Guys



How could I improve on this shot, please. I was trying to capture the Bee and the Spider that is in the left of the shot. Taken on my Olympus E-20 with an Olympus Macro lens attatched. I got part of the bee in focus but seemed to loose the clarity on the spider, I am still very new at photography, but as I only have forums to bounce ideas off, I am finding it quite tricky.



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Old Jul 12, 2007, 9:43 AM   #2
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Steve...
What I see in your shot, the DOF is really tight...You have such a small window to get things in focus that you sacrofice one part of the shot for another...The obvious is to shoot the shot with a wider DOF...I dont know anything about your camera but with a DSLR, bumping up the fstop will give you a wider DOF...Another thing, next time, get the bee to turn around and smile... :?
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Old Jul 12, 2007, 11:17 PM   #3
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For me, it would have been better if the bee were more in focus. I agree the DOF is too tight
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Old Jul 13, 2007, 2:22 AM   #4
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Thanks Again Guys',

I have just started reading about DOF and how to set my camera correctly for this, I will have another crack at it and let you see the results.

P.S It may have to be a different Bee :-):-):-):-)



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Old Jul 13, 2007, 7:47 AM   #5
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If you're experimenting with DOF, or want extra information, I've found this web site invaluable. It will eliminate a lot of trial and error:

http://www.dofmaster.com/dofjs.html

It pretty neat.
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