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Old Aug 22, 2007, 5:25 AM   #1
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Old Aug 23, 2007, 1:02 AM   #2
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Old Aug 23, 2007, 12:05 PM   #3
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Nice picture , But could be enhanced if you do litle bit of crop.B'coz I feel the rabbit is a main subject,so that should cover the more space .IMHO
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Old Aug 24, 2007, 12:37 AM   #5
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That crop you did does help with putting more emphasis on the rabbit. However, I don't like that the rabbit is now looking out of the frame. Plus, that crop placed the rabbit dead center, which doesn't give off much dynamic feel.

I did a quick crop of your first photo, placing the rabbit more to the left third, giving the rabbit the appearance of looking at those flowers. I included the shrubbery at the top to give a sense of scale for the rabbit, or else he would have appeared like a giant taking up the full frame.

Colors and exposure look good. Wish you could get a little shallower DOF.

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Old Aug 24, 2007, 8:42 AM   #6
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both are eqaully nice pictures,But illuminati has a point and has an extra edge in his picture IMHO
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Old Aug 24, 2007, 8:59 AM   #7
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Definitely.



The crop is much better - mine was knocked out at work using MS Paint.



Really does look like an Easter card now (as one of my colleagues said).



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