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Old Nov 22, 2007, 5:06 PM   #1
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Im interested in your comments regarding the collage. Good idea or not? Any suggestions how it might be displayed better? By the way its a Dream Catcher not Dream Weaver. Ive got computer software on the brain.
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Old Nov 23, 2007, 3:30 PM   #2
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A really good collage, the colours and matching border are just great.......................musket
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Old Nov 23, 2007, 5:32 PM   #3
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Thanks musket. I am trying to make a piece of artwork out of the dream catcher. Im not sure about what Ive done. Your comments are appreciated.
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Old Nov 26, 2007, 4:50 AM   #4
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Agreed with musket on the eye pleasing colour and the matching border! I alsofindpatternsappealing.The geometric perspectiveprovided by the three figures'getting' smaller to the left top cornerreinforced bysome atmospheric perspective as they bury into the dark works greatHowever, I find the remainingfour figures extra, which,I think, could be replaced byevena much biggerfragment ofthe patternon the right bottom corner!
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Old Nov 26, 2007, 11:47 AM   #5
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I see what you are getting at bahadir. Ive been playing a bit with a new design based on your description. Thanks.
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Old Nov 27, 2007, 1:53 AM   #6
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I see what you are getting at bahadir. Ive been playing a bit with a new design based on your description. Thanks.
Thanks for counting my simple suggestion, Bynx: )Would be delighted to see the next design, too!
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Old Nov 27, 2007, 5:35 PM   #7
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Ok this is the next design. Any better?
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Old Nov 28, 2007, 1:49 AM   #8
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Very nice!The nearest one, the new comer:-) ,might need lowering a little bit aligning its center with the corner though..

Afertilefield to apply your good sense of aesthetics; )
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Old Nov 28, 2007, 7:17 AM   #9
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Well I gotta say you have a good eye. I made the change and replaced the pic.
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Old Nov 28, 2007, 8:11 AM   #10
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Well I gotta say you have a good eye. I made the change and replaced the pic.

Thanks forthecompliment, which I could not hear had it not been for your inspiring image : )

Ummm, and I gotta say you're quite diligent when aesthetics is concerned ; )You just hit the nail on the head with your latest edit, what was uppermost in my mind But we've missed the comparison now when you replaced it:!:

Anyway, still I think you mayadd'just afraction' more of the 'new comer' to the bottom making the frameslightly moresquarred. I do not need to tell how much, for I'm sure you'll decideit best,even weather or not to apply this additional suggestion all together! Then, you can sell it as a book cover, already having quite a fitting title: Dream Catcher!!
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