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Old Feb 16, 2008, 12:00 PM   #1
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please give me some feedback on this....what would help this or what hurts this shot

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Old Feb 16, 2008, 1:33 PM   #2
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Hi Randy,

The only thing that I can see is the background you can see some noise on the right hand side and maybe boosting the saturation on the green to make it jump a little apart from that I like it nice DOF and nice composition.



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Old Feb 16, 2008, 1:37 PM   #3
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Hope you dont mind Randy but I had a play about. See what you think.



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Old Feb 16, 2008, 2:37 PM   #4
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Hi Randy, I really like your subject and I think Neil has some good points. I also think that if you re-cropped the picture into a square it would emphasis the ice and the buds more. Right now all of that empty space to the left of the subject is distracting and I feel takes the focus off of where it should be. I took the liberty of provided an example of what I mean. This is an 8x8 crop.
It's all personal preference really, so if you like your crop better then OK.
Again, I really like your photo and I hope my comments help,
All the best,

Steve



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Old Feb 16, 2008, 8:12 PM   #5
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well i sure like the crop better and i think i like the boost in saturation also...i know ive learned so much from you guys....thanks for the comments....randy






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