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Old May 23, 2008, 10:45 PM   #1
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how did i do any comments are welcome
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Old May 24, 2008, 12:58 AM   #2
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How did you do what? Bake bread, fix your car, clean the house? If you are talking photos here did you use a camera? Do you have a camera? Perhaps the lens cap was on? If it was off then I suggest your photo is badly underexposed, too grainy, but your imagination is exemplory.
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Old May 24, 2008, 12:48 PM   #3
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Jollyr..... you did not attack a picture to this forum thread...
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Old May 24, 2008, 3:52 PM   #4
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that's funny Bynx:lol:
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Jollyr..... you did not attack a picture to this forum thread...
Bynx, your humor kills me!
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Old May 24, 2008, 5:54 PM   #6
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My ole grandpappy once said .... pictures are always best when seen. Now I can see it I like it. Your camera is working ok jollyr.
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Old May 24, 2008, 6:59 PM   #7
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thx Bynx :-)
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I can see flash light spots and natural light (blue ish) Soften the flash light ewven more? That would make the lighting perfect if you hardly cannot notice flash light.

On the right there 's a half leave on the pic. Try to move around and find a better angle to shoot?

Also notice that you shot the main subject in the centre of the picture. A better composition is to place the main subject out of the center. That makes it better to look at
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Old May 25, 2008, 8:11 PM   #9
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thx for your input feetjaihow is this one.:|
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Old May 26, 2008, 3:23 AM   #10
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The long stem does not add much, imo! I'dfill the frame with more of the leaves and place the plant from left to right direction more complementing our direction ofperception,keepingFeetjai's suggestion about a de-central composition in mind; ) ...and here'a sketch!

Btw, I wonder how Bynx's black T shirt would work as backdrop:-)
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