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Old May 24, 2008, 4:10 AM   #1
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Hi all,

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Old May 24, 2008, 9:20 AM   #2
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These snaps are taken with Pentax K100D - Asahi Pentax 125/2.8 Manual Lens


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Old May 24, 2008, 9:31 AM   #3
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This is with Pentax DA 18-55 mm lens.




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Old May 24, 2008, 9:32 AM   #4
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Another one with Pentax DA 18-55 mm lens.



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Old May 24, 2008, 11:44 AM   #5
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He. What I see is that all flowers are dead centered. This makes the pictures less attractive to look at. There's no room for your eyes to move around the picture to look for hidden things.

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Unsharp: maybe the shutter switch was pressed to quick without giving the autofocus time to focus right. Or there was handshake.

3rd pic: This one is far more attractive to look at. there is more then only the flower compared to the other pictures. And there is flower color and green leaves which makes nice to look at. There is far more depth in this picture and the water druplets and the new yong leaves coming give the viewer chance to move their eyes around the picture, because there is more to look at and they end with their eyes at the subject of this picture, the purple flower.

4th picture: again dead centrered and nothing around it.

Suggestion: turn or move the flower to one side so that there is more depth. So that they flower is not flat and becomes more attrractive to look at.

My 2,5 cents

Edit: to archive picture out of the centre: focus the thing you want sharp. Then keep the shutter button halfway pressed, then move the focus point away from the flower and if you think the composition is right, then take the picture.... hope this is helpfull

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