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Old May 24, 2008, 9:38 AM   #1
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Hi all,

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Old May 24, 2008, 11:57 AM   #2
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The picture is very spontaneous. Both sharp. Background is unsharp and brings both mother and child forward out of the picture.

The handmovement of the child suggests that the picture is taken right at the middle of the fun...



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Zoom more in...because there is a bit too much space above their heads..or cut the picture.

And don't place them in the centre of the picture...move the camera focus point more to the left..so that the woman has her back more the the side of the picture so that you can also see the foot more...
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Old May 24, 2008, 5:49 PM   #3
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nice shot. I took the liberty to crop it just to see what it looked like. I like it
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Old May 25, 2008, 1:41 AM   #4
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nice shot. I took the liberty to crop it just to see what it looked like. I like it
The crop is nice. You could wonder as viewer why they both are so happy about. Then you see the trouwer that is rolled up a bit. and conclude..aah they are having a foot bath.

I am thinking if the crop would be better if you see foot more....
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Old May 25, 2008, 6:37 PM   #5
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I realy like the emotion captured in this picture. I actually like the original more than the crop, as the hand of the child adds a lot of the effect. Maybe a less tight crop, and leaving some more space either side of them to experiment a bit more with different crops.
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Old May 25, 2008, 8:05 PM   #6
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very nice shot were about in india:|
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Old May 26, 2008, 3:09 PM   #7
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Thank you everybody, for your valueable comments.

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Old May 26, 2008, 5:41 PM   #8
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What if you take a picture from a much lower point? so that the camera sees the horizon too? Or at least photograph the whole stone...because it's the subject.

The fisherman. I would zoom into the fisherman more...and leave less space above, and right. The left part is good.


Also notice that the fisherman is looking left and right of the picture is a lot of space. It would be better to have the figherman look towards the side with the most space...
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What if you take a picture from a much lower point? so that the camera sees the horizon too?
Good point to consider! They say 6ft, ora man's height is often the worst point of view to shoot sth :-)


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Old May 27, 2008, 2:17 PM   #10
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What about this.. ?
But this not the same view as above (stone is not the subject)


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