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Old Jul 7, 2008, 8:02 PM   #1
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i was working in my back yard garden and i saw this any comments are welcome
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Old Jul 7, 2008, 8:25 PM   #2
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Very nice, good composition.
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Old Jul 7, 2008, 9:48 PM   #3
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I like the focus/dof combination, it's nicely done. The only thing that I mighttry doing next time is to move over a bit, so the thistle (it looks like some type of thistle to me) doesn't have the yellow plant (grass?) directly behind it. The yellow and pale purple are a little too close in contrast, I think the flower would stand out better with the darker background. A minor point, really, just something to try to see if it would help or not.
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Old Jul 8, 2008, 11:04 AM   #4
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Nice.

One comment: See the background, the right yellow thing? The unsharpness of that one is great. More to the left and far left the yellow things become quiet clear.

In the middle the flower does not stand out so much any longer...subject and background merge almost into one. An possible solution might be to move a bit left or right....then the yellow thing in the middle is not just behind the purple flower..that would make your subject stand out more then...

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Old Jul 9, 2008, 8:37 PM   #5
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hi guys thx for your comments. Iam new is this game.I hope next one will be better :|
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