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Old Jul 12, 2008, 4:30 PM   #1
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Im New with my lumix fz 50... :|
and now I try to play with speed..
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Old Jul 13, 2008, 1:59 AM   #2
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Interesting picture:

- Shutter time of 4 sec. How did you kept youself so still? Small joke --> drugs = stoned?? =)

- Good still and movement pic...very creative.

- The colors are dreamy, nice tweaking with the white balance.

- Thinking hard to find any improvements. Aah maybe1 minor point. cut the right side of the picture a bit. So that thepartly on the picture car is removed. This way you will position yourself more to the right. Which makes your composition a bit better. Because you look left, move yourself more to the right in this case.The other car on the far left is ok. It is not too big in the picture, but luckily not to less and still gives youmore feel of depth. (edit: maybe not even worth changing..the pic is just fine....)



General warning to all (young) fellow photographers:

Hands off the drugs...the do far more damage then you ever can think of. Many people become walking zombies who have only one goal at their mind...how to get the few dollars to get a shot....really a shame. And life is over..... Never believe so called friends that say it's cool. Know what's good ...and what's not good.....

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The idea of having yourself placed more to the right gives the picture a stronger feeling that you are standing ready to shoot....waiting for a fast car ......
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Old Jul 15, 2008, 1:14 PM   #4
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Appreciated it... thanks..
and ur right bout the car, it so not important..
and thanks one more time for the advice bout drugs... lol :lol:
Thanks god I never, even near, to that things... :-)
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He Ofix. Your christian? Moslim? Budhist?
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Old Jul 15, 2008, 4:08 PM   #6
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moslem, why?

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Old Jul 16, 2008, 11:48 AM   #7
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Its an interesting idea showing the speed of the cars versus the statue look of the person. I suggest you might try flash for the person and leave the rest of the 4 second exposure for the vehicles. That way the person will be in sharper focus. Nice shot nonetheless. I like the colors. And in case feetjai wants to know my religion, Im an Aztec. Bring on the virgins.

I just sharpened up the body a bit. Hardly noticeable but I thought its an interesting picture.
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Old Jul 16, 2008, 5:14 PM   #8
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moslem, why?
No you typed God so I was wondering what kind of belief you have. That's all =)
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Nice edit fromBynx,further emphasizing the the live statue : ) Imust sayI quite liked the poseand point of view the subject taken from, displaying ofixmyth's good taste! (if only it was a bit less centered)

PS:Any room for an Artemisfervent??
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