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Old Jul 25, 2008, 1:34 PM   #1
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Last monday my girlfriend and I visited her brother and his girlfriend, they just got a baby, Louise. No pp, just b/w, Nikon D70s, Nikkor 50mm

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My girlfriend and Louise:

What do you think of it?
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Old Jul 26, 2008, 8:55 AM   #4
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Hello fong82

Congratulations to your girlfriend's brother and his girlfriend with their baby, Louise. Cute baby (aren't they all)!?

Photo 1... Beautiful baby! It looks like the focus is on the mouth / lips or nose... maybe you need a bit more dof (depth of field) or to focus on the eyes

Photo 2. One of dog's eyes is in focus, the other is too dark (maybe try to get even lighting... but it's a cool shot).

Photo 3. Here the baby's face is not the clearest in focus (but your girlfriend is). I know it's tricky if you use a lens with a wide aperture, like maybe you did with your Nikkor 50mm (but no exif information is stored with the photos, so I can't see what f-stop you had it set at).

So practise your technique to include maybe a bit more focus. But still, good photos and important for memories (babies change so fast!)

The black and white works well for this series, imho.

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