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Old Sep 30, 2008, 6:37 PM   #1
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Interesting shot. Is that a panorama or has it been cropped. Nice color balance. The greenish fluorescent lighting has been neutralized well. As for composition, thats something else. What were you trying to show? The car or the car park?
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i was going for the car. i wanted to show the contrast between this high level car and the average ones in the back ground. kind of like the car was "slumming" if you know what i am getting at.
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Is it a crop job or a panorama?
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Old Sep 30, 2008, 8:00 PM   #5
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it is a crop.
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hi boofighter,

........when I saw this photo my question was not the same as John's. My take on this is, "ok, it is a car that is posed for taking a snapshot in a garage, next photo please".

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Old Oct 1, 2008, 11:33 AM   #7
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Do like the lighting at some places , making he car more then plain black.

The light at the ceiling is distracting if possible...find a place without that light in the picture.

Do like the lightson and the left direction light does give some extra. Also the wheel turned a bit. It's a small detail, but gives it just a little more.

A thought: if possible find a spot where all the cars face the same way as your car.And play with colors: find lights cars..then your car will stand out...just like the white and grey ones in your pic.
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thank you for the tips.
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