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Old Feb 28, 2009, 7:44 AM   #1
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Old Feb 28, 2009, 8:28 AM   #2
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Very nice shot. that is sepia correct. Really took me back to when I was a kid.
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Old Feb 28, 2009, 8:58 AM   #3
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I like the edit you have done and it is a great use of the light to bring out the subject and then this drops off into the distance.

There are a couple of things that can be done to make this work even better.

It feels that there is a slight rotation to the left so correcting that tho the right is going to help, it's not much, but it is noticeable.

Also the two boys are in step (this is very common when people are walking together without thinking about it) but when capturing that in a photo it doesn't look natural.

Both these things are minor and you still have a lovely shot but if you have a chance to do something like this again then take a look at that.
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Old Feb 28, 2009, 9:05 AM   #4
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Proper use of sepia job indeed! Thestriking synch of the boysgoes quite well with theoverall eye pleasingcomposition.Ah, how about the dads:-)
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Old Mar 2, 2009, 11:48 AM   #5
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Wonderful shot. The lighting and sepia worked very well here and I really like the composition.
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I agree excellent composed shot
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Old Mar 2, 2009, 7:24 PM   #7
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thank you all for your feedback.......when i saw these two kids all i could think of was my childhood......hope it did the same for you alll...thanks again...you guys are an insperation to me.....randy
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