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Old Aug 10, 2009, 4:10 PM   #1
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Photo of my youngest boy in a park as the sun was setting. Comments on composition and lighting appreciated.

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Old Aug 10, 2009, 4:24 PM   #2
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I really like the concept. There are several issues that jump out though:
1. Your son isn't in good focus. It would appear the camera is focused on the wildflowers behind him
2. Skintones / shirt a bit too warm for my tastes.
3. Leaves on the right of the frame are very distracting. The wildflowers behind him are a great backdrop, but I would recommend not having the leaves in between you and your subject next time.
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Old Aug 11, 2009, 12:35 PM   #3
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I really like the concept. There are several issues that jump out though:
1. Your son isn't in good focus. It would appear the camera is focused on the wildflowers behind him
2. Skintones / shirt a bit too warm for my tastes.
3. Leaves on the right of the frame are very distracting. The wildflowers behind him are a great backdrop, but I would recommend not having the leaves in between you and your subject next time.
Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it. This forum is a great resource.

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