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Old Aug 27, 2009, 6:42 AM   #1
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Old Aug 27, 2009, 8:58 AM   #2
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I love looking at, being near, and photographing waterfalls. This is a beaut. But I feel the foreground which Ive cropped out is unnecessary. The front part of it looks more out of focus and there doesnt seem to be much balance and the pic looks top heavy. Just my opinion and I havent had my coffee yet.
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Old Aug 28, 2009, 6:31 AM   #3
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I love looking at, being near, and photographing waterfalls. This is a beaut. But I feel the foreground which Ive cropped out is unnecessary. The front part of it looks more out of focus and there doesnt seem to be much balance and the pic looks top heavy. Just my opinion and I havent had my coffee yet.
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Having given you my fully explained c&c with a visual aid, I would hope for something more than thank you. Better not respond at all if thats all you have. If you agree or dont agree then by all means say so, so I and others can see where you are coming from. Thank you tells me nothing except your momma brought you up right.
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Feeling like this didnt go right I went to your sight and see you have 2 shots of waterfalls as well as a lot of other nice southern Ontario countryside. While the bulk of your work is quite spectacular with a nice use of post production tools, your waterfalls come up short. The second shot has me wondering what is the subject and main focus. The waterfall is chopped off at the top and we are left looking at a trail of water as the subject. Im sure thats not what you intended. Your comments?

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