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Old Oct 4, 2009, 12:23 PM   #1
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I was trying to keep the Falcon as the main subject of course. However I was hoping to have the Audience reaction as background but it just seems to be too busy and distracting. Am I trying to do too much, or is there a way too accomplish this?
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Old Oct 4, 2009, 12:25 PM   #2
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A great idea indeed. But very much difficult to acomplish in one shot. I would say this merits some kind of superimposed image and a lot of pp.
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Old Oct 4, 2009, 12:30 PM   #3
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Maybe you could blur the background a little more?
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Old Oct 4, 2009, 12:50 PM   #4
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A much tighter crop (assuming the image can handle it) with the Falcon, roughly two thirds to the right of the image, with more space (and people) to the left.

Something like this:




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Wow, So simple, so obvious yet I never thought of a simple tight crop. Thanks muchly. Ed
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How about this?
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Old Oct 12, 2009, 9:22 PM   #7
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I like that as well. It gives a hint of the awe and proximity of the audience and the Hawk jumps out like it is in 3D or something, very cool. Thanks again Bynx.
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