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Old Oct 13, 2009, 10:03 AM   #1
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Hi, I really love this photo. I took it about 4 months ago but i feel like something is missing. Could anyone give me any ideas? I have considered adding color, or perhaps changing it into a painting. Thanks!
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Old Oct 13, 2009, 2:07 PM   #2
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hi foxy the images are not being displayed?
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yeah i cant get it to show, so i just did a link...could you help me?
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I think the stick and the leaf or whatever they are on the left hand side are rather obtrusive on the image. Other than that, it looks great.

Also, Im not a fan of the water on the flowers thing but thats obviously a personal taste. Perhaps you could shoot it once and spray it. Unless of course thats real rain water...
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yeah i cant get it to show, so i just did a link...could you help me?
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I agre that with JackAHearts that the foliage on the bottom-left is distracting. Good tones in the greyscale. Do you have a version with color?

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